关于 mockumentary-screenplay
用于以 Fountain 格式创作伪纪录片剧本的写作技能,涵盖采访、摄制组互动、纪实镜头和喜剧场景结构。
主要功能
- 01Fountain 剧本格式规范
- 02访谈镜头格式
- 03摄制组互动写法
- 04镜头角度与补充镜头
- 05伪纪录片节拍结构
适用场景
- 01撰写伪纪录片剧集试播集
- 02编排对镜采访场景
- 03通过插入镜头构建喜剧场景
安装
复制下面的命令,在终端中运行。
$
npx skills add https:/ / github.com/ joelborellis/ screenplay-mockumentary --skill mockumentary-screenplay安装后在 Claude Code 中输入/mockumentary-screenplay确认已加载。
详细介绍
伪纪录片剧本写作
使用 Fountain 格式编写剧本,并采用伪纪录片专属惯例。
Fountain 格式基础
核心元素
INT. LOCATION - DAY
Action lines describe what we see.
CHARACTER NAME
Dialogue goes here.
CHARACTER NAME (V.O.)
Voiceover dialogue.
CHARACTER NAME (O.S.)
Offscreen dialogue.
场景标题
INT. OFFICE - TALKING HEAD - DAY
INT. DOG SHOW - ARENA FLOOR - CONTINUOUS
EXT. PARKING LOT - LATER
括号说明(谨慎使用)
CHARACTER
(beat)
The line after a pause.
CHARACTER
(to other character)
Specific direction.
伪纪录片专属格式
采访式直面镜头
INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - TALKING HEAD - DAY
MICHAEL sits before a neutral background, speaking to someone off-camera.
MICHAEL
I'm not superstitious. But I am a little stitious.
He looks off-camera as if for validation.
关键元素:
- 场景标题包含「TALKING HEAD」
- 用简短的动作描写交代场景
- 角色对镜头外的采访者说话
- 加入看向镜头、停顿和反应
与纪录片摄制组互动
INT. OFFICE - DAY
MICHAEL notices the camera.
MICHAEL
(to camera)
Watch this. This is going to be great.
He approaches DWIGHT's desk. The camera follows.
多机位拍摄(纪录片风格)
INT. ARENA - DAY
WIDE: The competitors line up with their dogs.
The camera finds HARLAN in the crowd, adjusting his dog's collar obsessively.
HARLAN
(sotto, to dog)
This is our moment, Mr. Biscuits.
插入镜头/B-roll
INT. FACTORY FLOOR - B-ROLL - DAY
Workers operate machinery. Assembly line in motion.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Prestige Pickle has been family-owned for three generations.
带插入镜头的采访
INT. OFFICE - TALKING HEAD - DAY
SUSAN
We have an excellent safety record.
CUT TO:
INT. FACTORY FLOOR - DAY (ARCHIVAL)
A forklift tips over. Workers scatter.
BACK TO:
INT. OFFICE - TALKING HEAD - DAY
SUSAN
Excellent.
伪纪录片对白写作
采访式直面镜头的表达原则
过度吐露:角色对着镜头说出不该说的话。
MICHAEL
Jan and I have a very mature relationship. We never fight.
(beat)
Except about money. And her ex-husband. And Todd Packer.
盲目自信:角色信誓旦旦地说出错误的事情。
NIGEL
This one goes to eleven. It's one louder, isn't it?
不可靠叙述:角色所说的内容与我们看到的相矛盾。
NARRATOR (V.O.)
The team worked together seamlessly.
WIDE: The team argues loudly.
观察式场景对白
自然的对白重叠:
TEAM MEMBER 1
What we need to do is—
TEAM MEMBER 2
—No, but that's exactly what I was—
TEAM MEMBER 1
—Let me finish—
TEAM MEMBER 2
I'm agreeing with you!
对镜头的意识渗入:
JOHN
(noticing camera)
Oh, we're still—
(to team, lower)
They're still filming.
场景构建
伪纪录片的节拍模式
- 铺垫(通过观察式场景或采访确立情境)
- 升级(情境发展,喜剧张力逐渐增强)
- 爆发点(喜剧高潮,往往带有反讽意味)
- 尾声(采访式直面镜头的反应,往往削弱或印证前面的内容)
节拍模式示例
INT. MEETING ROOM - DAY
MANAGER addresses the team confidently.
MANAGER
This quarter, we're going to crush it.
CUT TO:
INT. OFFICE - TALKING HEAD - DAY
MANAGER
(less confident)
Define "crush."
CUT TO:
INT. MEETING ROOM - DAY
The sales chart shows a steep decline. MANAGER ignores it.
MANAGER (CONT'D)
Any questions? No? Great.
CUT TO:
INT. OFFICE - TALKING HEAD - DAY
EMPLOYEE
There were many questions.
输出格式
将剧本保存至:script/screenplay.fountain
Fountain 文件是纯文本,可通过各种工具(Highland、WriterSolo、Fountain.io)渲染为 PDF。
页数指南
- 电影长片伪纪录片:80-100 页
- 电视剧试播集:半小时剧集为 22-32 页,一小时剧集为 45-60 页
- 采访式直面镜头内容:不应超过总页数的 25%
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