关于 headline-formulas
headline-formulas 是面向营销人员和文案创作者的写作技能,利用成熟公式生成、调整和评估标题,适用于落地页、广告、邮件主题和社交内容。
主要功能
- 0125 种以上标题公式
- 02按营销目标匹配公式
- 03生成标题变体
- 04评分并排序标题选项
- 05适配不同内容形式
适用场景
- 01撰写落地页或广告标题
- 02制作邮件主题的 A/B 测试版本
- 03构思社交媒体引子
- 04评估并排序标题候选
安装
复制下面的命令,在终端中运行。
npx skills add https:/ / github.com/ guia-matthieu/ clawfu-skills --skill headline-formulas安装后在 Claude Code 中输入/headline-formulas确认已加载。
详细介绍
标题公式
25+ 个经过验证的标题公式,助你阻止读者滑走、吸引注意力并促成点击。涵盖各种场景的模板和示例。
何时使用此技能
- 为落地页、广告或文章撰写标题
- 撰写能提高打开率的邮件主题行
- 构思社交媒体吸引点
- 对不同标题版本进行 A/B 测试
- 克服标题写作瓶颈
- 培训团队掌握标题最佳实践
方法论基础
来源:汇编自 David Ogilvy、John Caples、Gary Halbert、Joanna Wiebe 的经验,以及数十年来经过测试的直效广告实践。
核心原则:“平均而言,阅读标题的人数是阅读正文人数的五倍。”(Ogilvy)标题占广告成功与否的 80%。
重要性:优秀的产品配上平淡无奇的标题,会以失败告终。普通的产品配上极具吸引力的标题,则能取得成功。标题是你所写内容中杠杆效应最高的部分。
Claude 负责什么,你来决定什么
“Claude 生成选项,你挑选胜出者。”
| Claude 负责 | 你提供 |
|---|---|
| 快速生成 10-20 个标题变体 | 要突出的核心优势/优惠 |
| 系统地运用经过验证的公式 | 对受众及其痛点的了解 |
| 混合使用不同类型的公式,增加多样性 | 品牌语气和风格限制 |
| 根据标准为标题打分 | 基于直觉 + 数据做出最终选择 |
| 创建 A/B 测试候选集 | 测试决策和胜出者分析 |
请记住:标题需要反复迭代。Claude 能加快生成速度;你则运用品味并根据测试结果做出判断。
此技能的功能
- 按公式生成标题 - 可直接套用的模板
- 根据目标匹配公式 - 好奇心、优势、新闻等
- 创建标题变体 - A/B 测试候选项
- 评估标题力度 - 根据经过验证的标准打分
- 调整标题以适配格式 - 落地页、邮件、社交媒体、广告
使用方法
生成标题
Give me 10 headlines for:
Product: [description]
Key benefit: [main value]
Format: [landing page/email/ad/social]
使用特定公式
Write 5 headlines using the [How-To / Number / Question / etc.] formula for:
[product/offer description]
评估标题
Score these headlines against best practices and rank them:
1. [headline]
2. [headline]
3. [headline]
标题变体
Create 10 variations of this headline for A/B testing:
[original headline]
说明
撰写标题时,请运用以下经过验证的公式:
类别 1:操作指南类标题
## HOW-TO FORMULAS
The "how-to" headline promises practical instruction. Works when audience wants to learn.
### Formula 1: Basic How-To
"How to [achieve desired outcome]"
Examples:
- "How to Win Friends and Influence People"
- "How to Write Copy That Sells"
- "How to Double Your Conversion Rate in 30 Days"
### Formula 2: How-To for Specific Audience
"How to [achieve outcome] (Even If [obstacle])"
Examples:
- "How to Build a 6-Figure Business (Even If You Have No Audience)"
- "How to Run a Marathon (Even If You've Never Run a Mile)"
- "How to Write a Book (Even If You Failed English)"
### Formula 3: How-To with Timeframe
"How to [achieve outcome] in [specific time]"
Examples:
- "How to Learn Spanish in 90 Days"
- "How to Build Your Email List in 30 Days"
- "How to Get Your First 1,000 Customers in 6 Months"
### Formula 4: How I Did It
"How I [achieved specific result]"
Examples:
- "How I Built a $10M Business from My Bedroom"
- "How I Lost 50 Pounds Without Giving Up Pizza"
- "How I Got 1 Million YouTube Subscribers in 18 Months"
类别 2:数字/列表类标题
## NUMBER HEADLINES
Specific numbers create curiosity and implied ease. Odd numbers often outperform even.
### Formula 5: The Basic List
"[Number] Ways to [achieve outcome]"
Examples:
- "7 Ways to Increase Your Email Open Rate"
- "21 Productivity Hacks for Remote Workers"
- "101 Blog Post Ideas for Any Niche"
### Formula 6: Things You Didn't Know
"[Number] [Topic] Secrets [Audience] Doesn't Know"
Examples:
- "7 Copywriting Secrets Most Marketers Never Learn"
- "5 Tax Deductions Your Accountant Forgot to Tell You"
- "9 Things Your Competition Doesn't Want You to Know"
### Formula 7: Mistakes/Errors
"[Number] [Topic] Mistakes That Are Costing You [Loss]"
Examples:
- "5 Landing Page Mistakes Costing You Conversions"
- "7 Resume Errors That Get You Rejected"
- "3 Diet Mistakes That Make You Gain Weight"
### Formula 8: Reasons Why
"[Number] Reasons Why [unexpected claim]"
Examples:
- "11 Reasons Why You're Not Getting Traffic"
- "5 Reasons Why Your Ads Aren't Converting"
- "7 Reasons Why Smart People Stay Poor"
### Formula 9: Specific Result Number
"Get [specific number] [result] with [method]"
Examples:
- "Get 10,000 Email Subscribers with One Landing Page"
- "Generate $5,000/Month with This Simple System"
- "Lose 15 Pounds in 6 Weeks Without Exercise"
类别 3:疑问类标题
## QUESTION HEADLINES
Questions engage the brain automatically. The reader mentally answers—and keeps reading.
### Formula 10: Do You Make This Mistake?
"Do You Make These [Topic] Mistakes?"
Examples:
- "Do You Make These Mistakes in English?" (famous John Caples headline)
- "Do You Make These LinkedIn Mistakes?"
- "Do You Make These Common SEO Errors?"
### Formula 11: Are You...?
"Are You [characteristic of target audience]?"
Examples:
- "Are You Too Busy to Be Rich?"
- "Are You Tired of Diets That Don't Work?"
- "Are You Losing Money While You Sleep?"
### Formula 12: What Would You...?
"What Would You Do With [desirable thing]?"
Examples:
- "What Would You Do With an Extra $1,000 a Month?"
- "What Would You Do With 10 Extra Hours a Week?"
- "What Would You Do If You Could Start Over?"
### Formula 13: Who Else Wants...?
"Who Else Wants [desirable outcome]?"
Examples:
- "Who Else Wants to Write a Bestselling Book?"
- "Who Else Wants to Build a 6-Figure Side Hustle?"
- "Who Else Wants Gorgeous Skin at 50?"
### Formula 14: What Happens When...?
"What Happens When [intriguing scenario]?"
Examples:
- "What Happens When an AI Writes Your Emails?"
- "What Happens When You Ignore Your Customer's Complaints?"
- "What Happens When You Stop Chasing Clients?"
类别 4:新闻/公告类标题
## NEWS HEADLINES
News headlines leverage our wired attraction to novelty. Works best for launches, updates, discoveries.
### Formula 15: Announcing/Introducing
"Announcing: [New thing and its benefit]"
"Introducing: [New solution to old problem]"
Examples:
- "Announcing: The First AI That Writes Like You"
- "Introducing: The Fastest Way to Build a Website"
- "Finally: A CRM That Works the Way You Do"
### Formula 16: Now You Can
"Now You Can [previously impossible/difficult thing]"
Examples:
- "Now You Can Build an App Without Coding"
- "Now You Can Get Custom Suits Without the Tailor"
- "Now You Can Invest Like a Hedge Fund"
### Formula 17: Discover
"Discover [surprising benefit or method]"
Examples:
- "Discover the Morning Routine of Top CEOs"
- "Discover Why 80% of Diets Fail (And What Actually Works)"
- "Discover the One Change That Tripled Our Revenue"
### Formula 18: New/Revolutionary/Breakthrough
"New [category] [does remarkable thing]"
(Use sparingly—overused and often feels hypey)
Examples:
- "New Software Writes Emails in Your Voice"
- "New Study Reveals the Real Cause of Burnout"
- "Breakthrough Technology Cuts Shipping Costs 50%"
类别 5:优势优先类标题
## BENEFIT HEADLINES
Lead with what they GET. The most direct approach.
### Formula 19: Get [Benefit]
"Get [Specific Desirable Result]"
Examples:
- "Get More Traffic With Less Content"
- "Get Abs Without Sit-Ups"
- "Get Booked Solid Without Cold Calling"
### Formula 20: The Only/Ultimate
"The Only [Category] That [Unique Benefit]"
"The Ultimate Guide to [Topic]"
Examples:
- "The Only Landing Page Builder With Built-In A/B Testing"
- "The Only Email Tool Made for Creators"
- "The Ultimate Guide to Facebook Ads in 2024"
### Formula 21: Transformation Statement
"Go From [Current State] to [Desired State]"
Examples:
- "Go From Freelancer to Agency Owner in 90 Days"
- "Go From Overwhelmed to Organized in One Week"
- "Go From Zero Followers to Verified in 6 Months"
### Formula 22: Without
"[Achieve Result] Without [Common Pain Point]"
Examples:
- "Lose Weight Without Counting Calories"
- "Build Muscle Without Living at the Gym"
- "Get Clients Without Cold Outreach"
类别 6:好奇/悬念类标题
## CURIOSITY HEADLINES
Create a gap between what they know and what they want to know. Compels the click.
### Formula 23: The Secret
"The Secret to [Desirable Outcome]"
"The [Unexpected] Secret to [Outcome]"
Examples:
- "The Secret to Writing 10X Faster"
- "The Weird Secret to Getting Your Kids to Listen"
- "The Japanese Secret to Living Past 100"
### Formula 24: What [Experts] Know
"What [Authority Figures] Know That You Don't"
"What [Industry] Doesn't Want You to Know"
Examples:
- "What Top Salespeople Know About Closing"
- "What Insurance Companies Hope You Never Find Out"
- "What Your Doctor Won't Tell You About Sleep"
### Formula 25: The Reason Why
"The Real Reason [Surprising Fact]"
"Why [Counterintuitive Statement]"
Examples:
- "The Real Reason Your Content Isn't Working"
- "Why Working Harder Makes You Less Successful"
- "Why Your Best Clients Came From Your Worst Marketing"
### Formula 26: Strange/Unusual/Weird
"The Strange [Method] That [Achieves Result]"
Examples:
- "The Strange Email That Gets 60% Reply Rates"
- "The Weird Diet Trick That Actually Works"
- "The Unusual Marketing Strategy Behind a $50M Brand"
类别 7:社会认同类标题
## SOCIAL PROOF HEADLINES
Leverage what others have achieved. Creates credibility and FOMO.
### Formula 27: Number of People
"Join [Number] [People] Who [Achieved Result]"
Examples:
- "Join 50,000 Marketers Getting Our Weekly Newsletter"
- "Join 10,000 Developers Who Shipped Faster"
- "Join 25,000 People Who Lost Weight Our Way"
### Formula 28: Stolen/Borrowed Authority
"[Celebrity/Brand] [Uses/Recommends/Does] [Thing]"
Examples:
- "Why Warren Buffett Reads 500 Pages a Day"
- "The Productivity System Used by Elon Musk"
- "The Framework McKinsey Uses for Strategy"
### Formula 29: Specific Testimonial
"[Person] Went From [Before] to [After]"
"How [Person] [Achieved Specific Result]"
Examples:
- "How Sarah Went From Side Hustle to $1M Business"
- "How This Teacher Built a YouTube Channel With 500K Subs"
- "How Tom Made $47K in 30 Days (Starting From Zero)"
标题高能词
## WORDS THAT BOOST HEADLINE PERFORMANCE
### Urgency Words
- Now, Today, Immediately, Instant
- Limited, Final, Last Chance
- Deadline, Expires, Before
### Benefit Words
- Free, Save, Easy, Simple
- Fast, Quick, Guaranteed
- Proven, Tested, Works
### Curiosity Words
- Secret, Hidden, Discover
- Revealed, Unusual, Strange
- Shocking, Surprising, Finally
### Emotion Words
- Afraid, Frustrated, Overwhelmed
- Excited, Confident, Peaceful
- Embarrassing, Devastating, Life-changing
### Specificity Words
- Exactly, Precisely, Step-by-step
- Complete, Comprehensive
- [Specific numbers and percentages]
示例
示例 1:为 SaaS 生成标题
背景:电子邮件营销软件的落地页
输入:
给我 10 个电子邮件营销工具的标题。核心优势:更高的送达率。受众:感到受挫的营销人员。
输出:
- 操作指南:“如何进入收件箱(而不是垃圾邮件文件夹)”
- 数字:“邮件无法送达的 5 个原因——以及如何解决”
- 疑问:“你的邮件真的送达订阅者了吗?”
- 新闻:“终于有了值得信赖的邮件送达率”
- 优势:“无需更改内容,即可获得 99.2% 的送达率”
- 好奇:“已有 2,500 个品牌知道的收件箱秘诀”
- 社会认同:“加入 10,000 名不再让邮件落入垃圾邮件的营销人员”
- 问题-强化:“你的邮件正在进入垃圾邮件文件夹。解决方法在这里。”
- 具体数据:“14 天内将送达率从 73% 提升至 99%”
- 无需:“轻松实现最高送达率,不再为送达率烦恼”
胜出者分析:#9 以具体数据(前后对比)取胜。#5 则以大胆、具体的主张取胜。两者都是出色的 A/B 测试候选项。
示例 2:邮件主题行变体
背景:推广网络研讨会的邮件
输入:
为一场关于 B2B SaaS 内容策略的网络研讨会创建 10 个主题行变体
输出:
| # | 主题行 | 使用的公式 |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | 每家 SaaS 公司都会犯的内容策略错误 | 错误 |
| 2 | 我们如何通过一篇博客文章获得 200 个潜在客户 | How I + 具体数据 |
| 3 | [Webinar] 你的内容不起作用。原因在这里。 | 问题 |
| 4 | 真正适用于 B2B SaaS 的 3 种内容策略 | 数字 + 具体性 |
| 5 | 为什么你的博客没有带来潜在客户(免费网络研讨会) | Why + 优惠 |
| 6 | 借鉴我们的 B2B 内容策略(我们花了 3 年打造) | 好奇心 + 价值 |
| 7 | 加入 500 位 SaaS 营销人员,参加本次直播 | 社会认同 |
| 8 | 停止创作内容。改为这样做。 | 反直觉 |
| 9 | 推动我们增长的 0 美元内容策略 | 好奇心 + 具体性 |
| 10 | 竞争对手的内容攻略(现已揭晓) | 好奇心 |
A/B 测试建议:测试 #3(直击痛点)、#6(好奇心 + 价值)和 #4(数字 + 具体性)
示例 3:标题评分
背景:评估三个标题选项
输入:
为这些标题评分:
- “推出我们的新软件”
- “10,000 名营销人员都已转用的软件”
- “用一半的精力获得 3 倍潜在客户”
输出:
| 标准 | #1 | #2 | #3 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 具体收益 | 1 | 2 | 5 |
| 好奇心/吸引力 | 1 | 3 | 4 |
| 目标受众明确 | 1 | 4 | 4 |
| 对自身利益的吸引力 | 1 | 3 | 5 |
| 避免含糊 | 1 | 3 | 4 |
| 易于记忆 | 1 | 3 | 4 |
| 总计 | 6/30 | 18/30 | 26/30 |
结论:
- #1:太含糊,没有收益,什么内容都能用
- #2:社会认同不错,但缺少具体结果
- #3:胜出——具体、突出收益,且主张可衡量
#1 的改进版本:“隆重推出:首款专为提升转化打造的邮件工具(不只是发送邮件)”
检查清单与模板
标题评估检查清单
## Before Publishing, Check:
### Clarity
- [ ] Can someone understand it without context?
- [ ] Is the benefit obvious?
- [ ] Is the audience clear?
### Specificity
- [ ] Are there specific numbers?
- [ ] Is it concrete (not abstract)?
- [ ] Could only YOUR product use this headline?
### Emotion
- [ ] Does it trigger curiosity, desire, or urgency?
- [ ] Does it speak to a real pain or aspiration?
- [ ] Would someone want to click to learn more?
### Credibility
- [ ] Is the claim believable?
- [ ] Can you prove it?
- [ ] Does it avoid hype words?
### Format
- [ ] Is it the right length for the platform?
- [ ] Does it work on mobile?
- [ ] Is key info at the start (in case of truncation)?
公式速查表
## Copy-Paste Formula Bank
HOW-TO:
□ How to [achieve outcome] in [timeframe]
□ How to [achieve outcome] without [common pain]
□ How I [achieved specific result]
NUMBER:
□ [#] Ways to [achieve outcome]
□ [#] [Topic] Mistakes Costing You [Loss]
□ [#] Reasons Why [surprising claim]
QUESTION:
□ Do You Make These [Topic] Mistakes?
□ Are You [characteristic of target]?
□ Who Else Wants [desirable outcome]?
BENEFIT:
□ Get [Specific Result] Without [Pain]
□ The Only [Category] That [Unique Benefit]
□ Go From [Current] to [Desired] in [Time]
CURIOSITY:
□ The Secret to [Outcome]
□ Why [Counterintuitive Statement]
□ What [Experts] Know That You Don't
SOCIAL PROOF:
□ Join [#] [People] Who [Achieved Result]
□ How [Person] [Achieved Specific Result]
标题素材库模板
## Headline Swipe File
Collect winners here for future inspiration:
### [Category: e.g., Email Subject Lines]
| Headline | Source | Why It Works |
|----------|--------|--------------|
| [Headline] | [Where found] | [Notes] |
### [Category: e.g., Landing Pages]
| Headline | Source | Why It Works |
|----------|--------|--------------|
| [Headline] | [Where found] | [Notes] |
技能边界(适用范围判断)
这项技能擅长:
- 决定转化效果的着陆页标题
- 需要多种版本进行 A/B 测试的邮件主题行
- 广告文案生成(Facebook、Google、LinkedIn)
- 文章和博客文章的内容标题
- 能让人停下滚动的社交媒体吸睛文案
这项技能不适用于:
- 品牌标语(周期更长,需要品牌策略背景)→ 先使用 brand-strategy 技能
- 技术文档标题 → 这类标题遵循不同的惯例
- 需要特定法律措辞的标题 → 需要人工/法律审核
- 公式显得过于“营销化”的极细分 B2B 场景 → 调整语气或使用更温和的公式
质量检查点
发布前,请确认:
- 标题针对你的产品(竞争对手无法直接套用)
- 前 6 个词中包含关键收益(适用于移动端/截断显示)
- 不包含无法证明的无依据主张
- 与实际内容/优惠相符(没有诱饵调包)
- 听起来像真人会说的话
迭代指南
“第一批内容只是原始素材。通过迭代打磨。”
建议的迭代模式
| 轮次 | 重点 | 要问的问题 |
|---|---|---|
| 第 1 轮 | 数量 | “使用不同公式给我 15 个标题” |
| 第 2 轮 | 筛选 | “哪 5 个的吸引力最强?为什么?” |
| 第 3 轮 | 优化 | “让这些标题更贴合 [受众细节]” |
| 第 4 轮 | 测试 | “为胜出标题创建 3 个变体,用于 A/B 测试” |
实用的后续提示词
生成第一批内容后,试试:
- “这些感觉太普通了。加入 [具体产品优势或数据]”
- “太像推销了。让语气更自然、更像编辑文章”
- “受众 [见多识广/持怀疑态度]。降低炒作感”
- “仅使用问题公式,再创建 5 个”
- “将这些标题缩短到 8 个词以内,以适应移动端”
学习曲线
| 使用次数 | 你将体验到什么 |
|---|---|
| 第 1 次 | 了解公式类别,快速获取 15+ 个选项 |
| 第 5 次 | 找到自己喜欢的类型,开始指定特定的公式类型 |
| 第 20 次 | 内化这些公式,主要利用 Claude 提升速度和多样性 |
专家提示:建立一个有效标题的收藏文档。将表现最好的标题作为示例提供给 Claude,以获得更好的结果。
参考资料
- Ogilvy,David。《Ogilvy on Advertising》(1983)
- Caples,John。《Tested Advertising Methods》(1932)
- Halbert,Gary。《The Boron Letters》(1984)
- Wiebe,Joanna。Copyhackers 标题研究
- CoSchedule 标题分析器方法论
- Upworthy 标题测试(好奇心缺口研究)
相关技能
- copywriting-ogilvy - 深入了解 Ogilvy 的标题原则
- copy-frameworks - 构建文案的其余部分
- email-writing - 结合上下文撰写主题行
- cta-writing - 标题之后的内容
技能元数据
- 模式:cyborg
name: headline-formulas
category: content
subcategory: copywriting
version: 2.0
author: GUIA
source_expert: Multiple (Ogilvy, Caples, Halbert, Wiebe)
source_work: Compilation of proven headline patterns
difficulty: beginner
mode: cyborg # Cyborg = rapid iteration, creative exploration, tight feedback loop
estimated_value: $500 headline workshop
tags: [headlines, copywriting, formulas, templates, subject-lines, A/B-testing]
created: 2025-01-24
updated: 2026-01-28
此技能是 GUIA Premium Marketing Skills Library 的一部分——这个 201 层连接了 AI 基础知识与技术实现。