关于 storytelling-storybrand
storytelling-storybrand 是一项运用 Donald Miller 的 StoryBrand 七部分框架的营销文案技能,适用于需要厘清品牌信息的团队与营销人员。它可协助创建 BrandScript、简短介绍、网站文案和销售脚本。
主要功能
- 01应用 SB7 故事框架
- 02创建 BrandScript
- 03撰写品牌简短介绍
- 04改写网站营销信息
- 05构建叙事型销售脚本
适用场景
- 01梳理网站首页与落地页信息
- 02明确产品定位和客户问题
- 03撰写品牌介绍与营销文案
- 04培训团队保持信息表达一致
安装
复制下面的命令,在终端中运行。
npx skills add https:/ / github.com/ guia-matthieu/ clawfu-skills --skill storytelling-storybrand安装后在 Claude Code 中输入/storytelling-storybrand确认已加载。
详细介绍
StoryBrand 框架
掌握 Donald Miller 在《Building a StoryBrand》(2017 年)中提出的 7 部分 StoryBrand 框架。厘清你的信息,让客户真正愿意倾听。
何时使用此技能
- 创建或优化网站文案
- 撰写品牌叙事和营销文案
- 编写销售话术和推介稿
- 理清令人困惑的产品定位
- 创作营销短句
- 重新设计主页和着陆页
- 培训团队统一传达信息
方法论基础
来源:Donald Miller - 《Building a StoryBrand》(2017 年)
核心原则:
- “我们认为自己向客户传达的信息,与客户实际听到的信息,是两回事。”
- “人们不会购买最好的产品,而会购买他们能最快理解的产品。”
- “客户才是英雄,而不是你的品牌。”
两个致命错误:
- 关注品牌本身,而不是关注你如何帮助客户渡过难关、蓬勃发展
- 信息过于复杂,人们无法快速理解
故事为何有效:故事是组织信息的最有力工具。人类大脑天生擅长理解叙事。StoryBrand 运用故事结构,让营销信息清晰而有说服力。
Claude 负责什么,你来决定什么
| Claude 负责 | 你来决定 |
|---|---|
| 规划视频工作流 | 最终创意愿景 |
| 提供镜头构图建议 | 设备选择 |
| 创建故事板模板 | 品牌美学 |
| 生成脚本框架 | 最终审批 |
| 确定技术要求 | 预算分配 |
此技能的功能
- 应用 SB7 框架 - 用于营销的 7 部分故事结构
- 创建 BrandScript - 填写完整的故事模板
- 撰写短句 - 简洁的电梯推介词
- 重新设计网站 - 以故事为主线的网站文案
- 构建销售话术 - 基于叙事的销售方法
使用方法
创建 BrandScript
Help me create a StoryBrand BrandScript for:
Business: [description]
Customer: [who they serve]
Problem: [what customers struggle with]
撰写短句
Write a StoryBrand one-liner for:
Business: [description]
Main problem solved: [problem]
Result delivered: [outcome]
重新设计网站文案
Apply StoryBrand to my website messaging:
Current headline: [what it says now]
What we do: [description]
Who we help: [customer]
How we help: [solution]
构建销售话术
Create a StoryBrand sales script for:
Product: [description]
Customer problem: [pain]
Our solution: [how we help]
说明
应用 StoryBrand 时,请系统地梳理以下 7 个情节点:
SB7 框架
## THE STORY FORMULA
A **CHARACTER** (who wants something)
has a **PROBLEM** (that they're struggling with)
and meets a **GUIDE** (who understands them)
who gives them a **PLAN** (clear steps to follow)
and **CALLS THEM TO ACTION** (challenges them to act)
that helps them **AVOID FAILURE** (shows the stakes)
and ends in **SUCCESS** (achieves transformation)
---
## 1. THE CHARACTER (Your Customer)
**Key Principle**: Your customer is the HERO of the story, NOT your brand.
**Fatal Mistake**: Most brands position themselves as the hero. ("We are the leading provider of..." "Our award-winning solution..." "Founded in 1985...")
**The Fix**: Define who your customer is and what they want.
**Questions to Answer**:
- Who is the hero of this story?
- What do they want as it relates to your product/service?
- How does this help them survive or thrive?
**Template**:
"A [customer type] who wants [specific desire]..."
**Examples**:
- "A busy executive who wants to look professional without spending time on style"
- "A startup founder who wants to grow without wasting money on ads that don't work"
- "A homeowner who wants a reliable contractor they can trust"
**Rules**:
- ONE clear desire (not multiple)
- Related to survival/thriving (safety, status, belonging, meaning, resources)
- Specific to your offering
---
## 2. THE PROBLEM
**Key Principle**: Problems drive stories. Define the villain and three levels of problem.
**The Villain**:
Every hero needs an obstacle. Define your villain—the source of the problem.
**Villain Rules**:
- Must be a root source of the problem
- Must be relatable (customers recognize it)
- Must be singular (one villain, not many)
- Must be real (not abstract)
**The Three Problem Levels**:
| Level | Definition | Example (Financial Advisor) |
|-------|------------|---------------------------|
| External | The tangible, surface problem | "I don't know how to invest" |
| Internal | How it makes them feel | "I feel stupid about money" |
| Philosophical | Why it's wrong/unjust | "I shouldn't have to be a finance expert to retire" |
**Miller's Insight**: "Companies tend to sell solutions to external problems, but customers buy solutions to internal problems."
**Template**:
反派:[根本障碍] 外部问题:[具体问题] 内部问题:[他们的感受] 哲学问题:[为什么这是不对的]
**Example (Meal Delivery)**:
反派:现代生活的混乱 外部问题:“我没有时间烹饪健康的饭菜” 内部问题:“我觉得让家人吃加工食品很内疚” 哲学问题:“日程再忙,也不该以牺牲健康为代价”
---
## 3. THE GUIDE (Your Brand)
**Key Principle**: Your brand is the GUIDE, not the hero. Guides have "been there, done that."
**Fatal Mistake**: Competing with your customer for the hero role.
**The Fix**: Position yourself as the wise helper who enables the hero's success.
**Miller**: "If you focus on your customers' success, your own success will follow."
**Two Qualities of a Guide**:
### Empathy
Show you understand their pain.
- "We know how frustrating it is when..."
- "Like you, we've struggled with..."
- "We understand that..."
### Authority
Demonstrate competence and expertise.
- Testimonials
- Statistics
- Awards/logos
- Years of experience
- Case studies
**Balance Required**: Too much authority = arrogant. Too much empathy = weak. You need both.
**Template**:
"[Brand] understands [their pain] (empathy). With [credentials/proof], we've helped [results] (authority)."
**Example**:
"We know what it's like to watch hours disappear into your inbox. With 10 years helping executives reclaim their time, we've freed up over 1 million hours for leaders like you."
---
## 4. THE PLAN
**Key Principle**: Customers won't trust a guide without a plan. Plans remove confusion and fear.
**Two Types of Plans**:
### Process Plan (Removes Confusion)
Simple steps to do business with you.
**Rules**:
- 3-4 steps maximum
- Start with an action verb
- Name each step clearly
- End with the result
**Template**:
步骤 1:[行动] → [结果] 步骤 2:[行动] → [结果] 步骤 3:[行动] → [成功]
**Example (Financial Advisor)**:
- 预约免费咨询
- 获取定制退休计划
- 满怀信心地开始投资
**Example (SaaS)**:
- 注册免费试用
- 在 5 分钟内连接你的数据
- 获取助力业务增长的洞察
### Agreement Plan (Removes Fear)
Promises and guarantees that lower perceived risk.
**Examples**:
- "Money-back guarantee"
- "No long-term contracts"
- "Free cancellation anytime"
- "Your data stays private"
- "We'll never share your information"
**Template**:
"We promise: [commitment 1], [commitment 2], [commitment 3]"
---
## 5. CALLS TO ACTION
**Key Principle**: Customers won't take action unless challenged to do so.
**Miller**: "Heroes need to be challenged by the guide to take action."
**Two Types of CTAs**:
### Direct CTA
The obvious main ask. Should be everywhere and obvious.
- "Buy Now"
- "Schedule a Call"
- "Get Started"
- "Sign Up Free"
- "Request a Quote"
**Rules**:
- Use a different color than the rest of the page
- Put it above the fold AND repeated throughout
- Use action verbs
- Be specific about what happens next
### Transitional CTA
Lower commitment. Builds trust for those not ready to buy.
- "Download Free Guide"
- "Watch Demo"
- "Take the Quiz"
- "Get Free Sample"
- "Subscribe to Newsletter"
**Rules**:
- Moves them further into the story
- Provides value in exchange for attention
- Less prominent than direct CTA
- Still clearly visible
**Website Rule**: Both CTAs should be visible in the header of every page.
---
## 6. AVOID FAILURE (Stakes)
**Key Principle**: Every story needs stakes. What will the hero lose if they don't act?
**Miller**: "Everyone wants to avoid a tragic ending."
**Questions to Answer**:
- What negative outcomes await if they don't use your solution?
- What will they continue to suffer?
- What's at risk?
**Balance Warning**: Create enough stakes to motivate, but don't overdo fear (looks manipulative).
**Template**:
"Without [solution], you risk [negative outcome 1], [negative outcome 2], and [negative outcome 3]."
**Examples**:
- "Without a proper email system, you'll keep losing 20 hours a week to inbox chaos"
- "Companies that don't adapt will be left behind by competitors"
- "Don't let another year go by without taking control of your finances"
**Subtle vs Overt**:
- Subtle: "Most businesses struggle with X for years before finding a solution"
- Overt: "Without action, you risk bankruptcy, burnout, and losing everything you've built"
Start subtle. Only go overt if subtle isn't motivating action.
---
## 7. SUCCESS (The Happy Ending)
**Key Principle**: Tell people exactly how you can improve their lives—don't assume they know.
**Miller**: "Tell people where you're taking them, or they won't follow."
**Three Ways to End the Story**:
### 1. Winning Power/Position
Status, influence, achievement, resources.
**Example**: "Become the go-to expert in your field"
### 2. Union That Makes Hero Whole
Community, belonging, completeness, partnership.
**Example**: "Join a community of 10,000 founders"
### 3. Self-Realization
Becoming who they were meant to be, reaching potential.
**Example**: "Finally become the leader your team deserves"
**Template**:
"With [solution], you'll [achievement], [feeling], and [transformation]."
**Example (Fitness)**:
"You'll have the energy to play with your kids, the confidence to tackle new challenges, and finally feel at home in your own body."
**Paint the Picture**:
- Use specific, sensory language
- Describe the after state in detail
- Make it aspirational but achievable
超越 7 个要素:身份转变
## The Strongest Motivator
**Miller**: "Brands that participate in the identity transformation of their customers create passionate brand evangelists."
**Question**: Who does your customer want to BECOME?
**Before & After Identity**:
| Industry | Before Identity | After Identity |
|----------|-----------------|----------------|
| Fitness | "Out of shape and embarrassed" | "Confident and strong" |
| Finance | "Confused about money" | "In control and secure" |
| SaaS | "Overwhelmed and behind" | "Efficient and ahead" |
| Coaching | "Stuck and unfulfilled" | "Clear and purposeful" |
**Template**:
"From [before identity] to [after identity]"
**Use In**:
- Testimonials: "Before/after" stories
- Marketing: "Join the [aspirational identity]"
- Community: Name for customers (e.g., "Achievers")
示例
示例 1:完整 BrandScript(B2B SaaS)
业务:面向创意代理机构的项目管理软件
## CHARACTER
Creative agency owners who want to deliver projects on time without micromanaging their team.
## PROBLEM
Villain: Chaos and miscommunication
External: Projects are constantly behind schedule
Internal: "I feel like a babysitter, not a leader"
Philosophical: Running an agency shouldn't mean drowning in admin
## GUIDE
Empathy: "We've worked with 500+ agencies who felt exactly like you—talented people buried in busywork."
Authority: "Our platform has helped deliver 50,000+ projects on time."
## PLAN
Process:
1. Connect your tools in 5 minutes
2. See all projects in one clear view
3. Deliver on time, every time
Agreement:
- 30-day money-back guarantee
- Free migration from your current tool
- No long-term contract
## CALL TO ACTION
Direct: "Start Free Trial"
Transitional: "See How It Works" (video demo)
## FAILURE
Without control, you'll keep missing deadlines, burning out your team, and losing clients to competitors who deliver.
## SUCCESS
- Win back 10+ hours per week
- Become the agency clients recommend
- Build a team that runs itself
## TRANSFORMATION
From: Overwhelmed agency owner drowning in chaos
To: Confident leader running a well-oiled machine
示例 2:StoryBrand 一句话介绍
公式:
- 问题——从问题入手
- 解决方案——将你的产品定位为解决方案
- 结果——以成功收尾
模板: “[问题]令人烦恼。[产品]帮助[目标群体][解决方案],让他们能够[结果]。”
示例:
营销机构: “大多数小企业都很难在网上获得关注。我们的营销框架帮助你理清要传达的信息,让客户真正倾听并购买。”
健身应用: “没有计划时,想要练出好身材很难。FitPath 为你制定个性化的锻炼和饮食计划,让你在 90 天内改造身材。”
财务顾问: “退休规划既复杂又令人焦虑。我们为你制定简单、量身定制的计划,让你自信地退休。”
会计软件: “电子表格既浪费时间,又容易出错。CloudBooks 自动处理你的财务,让你专注于拓展业务。”
示例 3:运用 StoryBrand 重新设计网站
之前(典型的企业网站):
- 标题:“欢迎来到 Acme Solutions”
- 副标题:“自 1987 年以来,提供创新解决方案”
- 正文:“我们是企业级系统的领先供应商……”
- CTA:“了解更多”
之后(应用 StoryBrand):
- 标题:“每次都按时交付项目”(成功)
- 副标题:“为厌倦混乱的团队打造的简单项目管理工具”(问题 → 解决方案)
- 正文:
- 第 1 部分:问题(我们知道错过截止日期有多令人沮丧)
- 第 2 部分:引导者(加入已解决这一问题的 5,000 多个团队)
- 第 3 部分:计划(3 个步骤即可开始)
- 第 4 部分:成功(解决问题后生活会是什么样)
- CTA:“开始免费试用”(直接) | “观看演示”(过渡)
检查清单与模板
品牌脚本模板
## My StoryBrand BrandScript
### 1. CHARACTER
Who is your customer and what do they want?
_________________________________________________
### 2. PROBLEM
**Villain**: _____________________________________
**External Problem**: ____________________________
**Internal Problem**: ____________________________
**Philosophical Problem**: _______________________
### 3. GUIDE
**Empathy Statement**: ___________________________
**Authority Proof**: _____________________________
### 4. PLAN
**Step 1**: _____________________________________
**Step 2**: _____________________________________
**Step 3**: _____________________________________
**Agreements**: _________________________________
### 5. CALL TO ACTION
**Direct CTA**: _________________________________
**Transitional CTA**: ___________________________
### 6. FAILURE
What do they lose if they don't act?
_________________________________________________
### 7. SUCCESS
What do they gain when they do?
_________________________________________________
### TRANSFORMATION
**FROM**: ______________________________________
**TO**: ________________________________________
一句话介绍模板
## My One-Liner
[Problem statement].
[Product/Company name] helps [target customer] [what you do]
so they can [result/transformation].
Fill in:
Problem: _______________________________________
Product: _______________________________________
Target: ________________________________________
What you do: ___________________________________
Result: ________________________________________
My One-Liner:
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
网站检查清单
## StoryBrand Website Audit
### Header (Above the Fold)
- [ ] Headline promises success or solves problem
- [ ] Subhead clarifies what you offer
- [ ] Direct CTA button (contrasting color)
- [ ] Transitional CTA option
- [ ] Image shows happy customer OR success state
### Stakes Section
- [ ] Addresses what they stand to lose
- [ ] Not too fear-based (balanced)
### Value Proposition Section
- [ ] Shows how you solve their problem
- [ ] Focuses on their success (not your features)
### Guide Section
- [ ] Empathy statement ("We understand...")
- [ ] Authority proof (logos, testimonials, stats)
### Plan Section
- [ ] 3-4 clear steps
- [ ] Each step starts with action verb
- [ ] Makes doing business feel easy
### Success Section
- [ ] Paints picture of life after
- [ ] Aspirational but achievable
- [ ] Testimonials with transformation
### CTAs
- [ ] Direct CTA repeated multiple times
- [ ] Transitional CTA available
- [ ] Both clear and visible
技能边界
此技能擅长的内容
- 规划视频制作工作流
- 创建故事板框架
- 提出技术方案
- 提供创意指导模板
此技能无法完成的内容
- 替代专业摄像服务
- 直接编辑视频文件
- 做出最终创意判断
- 保证受众参与度
参考资料
- Miller, Donald. 《Building a StoryBrand》(2017)
- Miller, Donald. 《Marketing Made Simple》(2020)
- StoryBrand 网站:mystorybrand.com
- ClarifyYourMessage.com
相关技能
- positioning-dunford - 市场定位策略
- ogilvy-copywriting - 经典文案写作原则
- cialdini-persuasion - 影响力心理学
- landing-page-copy - 将 StoryBrand 应用于页面